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Post by JasonL » 25 Sep 2017, 13:13

Feel like nihilist arby's already has that worked out tho.

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Post by Warren » 30 Mar 2018, 12:47

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Post by Eric the .5b » 03 Oct 2018, 18:39

I'm thinking of doing a reread of Schlock Mercenary. I'll probably wait until this final arc winds up.

I mainly want to see if reading it all-at-once makes the last few arcs come across any better and less of the badly-paced messes that they struck me as.
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Re: Webcomics

Post by Jadagul » 03 Oct 2018, 19:38

Eric the .5b wrote:
03 Oct 2018, 18:39
I'm thinking of doing a reread of Schlock Mercenary. I'll probably wait until this final arc winds up.

I mainly want to see if reading it all-at-once makes the last few arcs come across any better and less of the badly-paced messes that they struck me as.
The last arc was pretty badly paced. But it was badly paced enough that he re-demarcated it in the middle of writing, so it's not like he didn't notice.

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Re: Webcomics

Post by Eric the .5b » 03 Oct 2018, 20:17

Jadagul wrote:
03 Oct 2018, 19:38
Eric the .5b wrote:
03 Oct 2018, 18:39
I'm thinking of doing a reread of Schlock Mercenary. I'll probably wait until this final arc winds up.

I mainly want to see if reading it all-at-once makes the last few arcs come across any better and less of the badly-paced messes that they struck me as.
The last arc was pretty badly paced. But it was badly paced enough that he re-demarcated it in the middle of writing, so it's not like he didn't notice.
Definitely, but the plotting and pacing have been bugging me since Big, Dumb Objects.
"Better that ten guilty persons escape than that one innocent suffer."
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Re: Webcomics

Post by Jadagul » 03 Oct 2018, 20:46

Eric the .5b wrote:
03 Oct 2018, 20:17
Jadagul wrote:
03 Oct 2018, 19:38
Eric the .5b wrote:
03 Oct 2018, 18:39
I'm thinking of doing a reread of Schlock Mercenary. I'll probably wait until this final arc winds up.

I mainly want to see if reading it all-at-once makes the last few arcs come across any better and less of the badly-paced messes that they struck me as.
The last arc was pretty badly paced. But it was badly paced enough that he re-demarcated it in the middle of writing, so it's not like he didn't notice.
Definitely, but the plotting and pacing have been bugging me since Big, Dumb Objects.
I think "A Little Immortality" was pretty well-paced. It felt kinda jarring while reading it live, but it works well as a contained story.

I think it's just not sure what scale it's working on, half the time. "Big Dumb Objects" is a long chapter with a lot of stuff going on. I thought each sub-section was pretty well-paced. "A Little Immortality" is much shorter and tighter, and also works (for me).

For "Mandatory Failure" he wanted to zoom out and do something on the "Big Dumb Objects" scale, but it got too big and out of control, and he had to cut it. And that moved it from "Slow but steady pace" to "abruptly ending very jerkily while skipping the interesting bits."

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Post by Eric the .5b » 03 Oct 2018, 22:34

The last few arcs have struck me as suddenly lurched toward a climax in the middle of what felt like building action. Delegates and Delegation was the last story that didn't give me that feeling.
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Post by Eric the .5b » 12 Oct 2018, 20:08

WRT Schlock: OK, a sane version of Chinook turning up is a nice touch. "Oh, a second character I like finally joined the discussion."
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